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TRYING TRANSPARENCY AGAIN.
YAY IT WORKS.

So I got this awesome snazzy haircut which is pretty short & can be made into a Korean boyish look if I wanted.
AKA I LOVE IT.
I can't handle long hair and because I know you love your long hair.
Short hair please.
I love bold lines. And purple. And that tank & top. That pattern was fun to draw on, ahah.
I wish I was this pretty. At least I have that outfit, which isn't that very pretty LOOL.

Okay shutting up now, tahtah. Enjoy~

(c) ~whitepearlvoice376
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I love
how you ask
for critique. <3
It gives me fun things to do on late nights. Woooo
OKAY so you are definitely improving both in the style and mechanics department. This is super cute. There's a lot of motion in this, and (darn it because I can't draw shoes) those shoes are fabuloussss.

I adore how you shaded with purple; it's kind of one of my weaknesses, for some reason. Hmm. Anyway...onto real critique.

Though the pose a a whole is nicely balanced, there's something about the placement of her limbs that seems a little off--specifically her (not our, her) left arm. The posing of it seems very forced and uncomfortable. The bangle bracelet also seems like it was a last-minute tack-on; there's no gravity. ;3; It should probably be resting at the very top of her hand, since it looks pretty loose around her wrist.

The wrinkles in the shirt are fantastic though <3 Especially with the pattern in there. You did a real nice job conforming the pattern to the curves of the fabric.

One more quick little pick-- The wrist of her right arm is just a tad thick. You see where you end the thumb into the wrist? That's probably how thin the wrist should be. c: Also try fattening up her upper arm a bit; it's exceedingly thin compared to her forearm.

I do love this, I really do. a@ I'm just getting rusty at critiquing without sounding like a total jerk. Buh-bye now~